There is a reasoning behind insanity.
Stop lying, it complicates things.
And nobody wants to play musical chairs alone.
I hope your indignity is your response to hurt.
If the sky would just look back when I stare,
we would all be better off.
And why do you keep calling if you always hang up?
Toying with people is just a way to pass time,
and love is a temporary state of mind.
...Then that new will wear off.
Please tell me what you think
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this is cute... in a weird way, but it's cool
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Quite the situation you write about in these lines - hard to be on the receiving end of these calls, but feel sorry for the person calling too - very mixed up. Poem flows well and is easy to read. Not sure about using the two offs so close together in these lines. Keep writing.
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Wow, sounds like you've got some major things going on ... I hope you work it out
But you're writing and asking some interesting questions that makes me, as the reader, think and identify with ... I love that!
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