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[ Midnight ]

Midnight
Light of moon
Creation of fantasies
Lost amid the dreams
Of reckless innocence
Scent of love mingled with
A taste of disaster laced
Surprise birthday cake
Forgotten in realms of midnight

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err written on a napkin at a restruant... so yeah lol

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  • Apsinthion
    October 8, 2007

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    great!

    i loved the bitter-sweet taste to it; love, disaster, the happiness of a birthday surprise, all those things will b gone n "forgotten in realms of midnight"

    great image..

    very nice write babe.. amazing stuff do come out on restaurant napkins lol!

    ~rana~




    • unheardwisdom
      October 8, 2007
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      lol yay for napkins and restruants that provide crayons at the table lol Thanks for reading


  • Shulamite
    October 8, 2007

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    I like how you connected the different figurative senses of what you feel midnight is. Tis really good unheardwisdom Resturants can be very inspiring for a good poem.