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How do you feel when the empty space between us is somehow touching nothing?
And your face, yes, your face..reflects life.
But even truth lies sometimes.
And the old sutff is no longer new,
but you are the fire that keeps.
And playing chess takes forever...
even if you are alone...keep breathing.

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  • transcendental baby gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    What a compeling write Amber! It always amazes me how a writer's abstractions make perfect sense when viewed through a reader's own experiences. I guess that's why I love to read, and why this touched me. The personal meaning it has to you is your own, but I can interpret certain things into my own life and make it meaningful to myself by asking those same questions ... I love that