Memories are vividly playing in her mind
like a slide show of feelings intertwined
each one brings a tear
one of joy one of fear
as each one slowly passes
through the years of highschool classes
death comes and death goes
mourned thoughout her picture show
one sticks out as others diminish
of one child’s life that was never finished
a shattered promise some broken glass
a memory that refuses to pass
a sight of glimmer a spot of red
loss of blood as tears were shed
left with a feeling of tragic guilt
a relationship broken before it was built
Author notes
I found this poem while searching through my books from a long time ago I hope you like it. I didn't know what to call it so for the time being it is called words.
Please tell me what you think
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Good
But remember that you don't have to rhyme. If you write free verse, you'll be able to express yourself so much better and use language alot more skillfully. You have alot of emotion in your poem, and you have a good command of the language, I'd be very interested in what you could do with free verse.
Noah
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