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Tide

The tides flow swiftly in and out,
Yet, hardly is it seen,
I am already lost in the deepest sea,
Of the greatest love that's ever been.

I watch, and wait, as the light dawns,
Covering the land for all to view.
It fill's me with an inner peace,
And confirms my love as true.

I can't help but smile wide,
As I finally have found my place.
I'm glad to be beside his side,
Throughout all time and space.

Author notes

Once again a little random, but short and sweet - well hopefully.

A contest entry

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  • Tiggs
    October 9, 2007

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    WOW WOW WOW
    I L.O
    L.O.
    L.O.V.E IT!!!
    great write, thanks for entry


  • Walking Tall
    October 8, 2007
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    contest whore =P
    another nice write =)
    seej


    • Tiggs
      October 14, 2007
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      ENTER TIGGS CONTEST ASSHOLE...
      LOVE YOU