poetry
complex intuition
black and white
seeps into mental crevices
redolent expectations
wandering platitudes
determined summation
infused feelings
taste, motion
image projection
raise the dead
lust and love
self realization
immortal thoughts
penned on foliage flesh
everlasting legacy
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Something new. This topic was new for me.. ummm good idea of using the topic, I like your free verse Maam plus the words that were added to my word bank after reading this one.
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A really fine expose`and a tribute to aspiring poets. An inspiring write. Thank-you, Ithica
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thsi piece is wonderful...truly lovely
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Such wonderful comments
this has created.
Your perfect poetic prowess,
penned perfectly a poem
on poetic pleasures.
Very pleasing.
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I love all the poetic "p" words in this comment thanks!
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Oh My!!
Whoa~~
Now this is certainly different read from You
I am unable to put my finger on it ...
but something unique and different
Love it
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infused feelings
taste, motion
image projection
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Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This was a whoo! A mouthful but a good one. I like this form better for you but maybe that's just cause I like free verse. The language was beautiful and not at all forced. I think you did a great job with this one. Thank you for entering.
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reflections
Where words roam into the open mind..sometimes bind on paper, fine or coarse, sometimes divine...poetry as you say leaves its lines in time. Makes a poet take
a step back , then move on...I liked this.
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"complex intuition
black and white
seeps into mental crevices"
"immortal thoughts
penned on foliage flesh
everlasting legacy"
Whether it be free verse or form, you always create beauty with your pen!
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wow I love this amera beautifully done
you do free verse so well
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Amera,
This has such a strong start, I knew i was in for a treat.
Joe
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Wow Teach,
You sure do know how to weave together a beauty!
I'm loving this free-style. Excellent Job Indeed!
Thanks for sharing, much love to you and yours!
And all the best within the contest too! Peace.
-Timothy aka poeticweaver
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very good descriptions. really liked the 2nd stanza. but everything you said fits well. there's nothin i can disagree with. particularly loved the line: immortal thoughts
penned on foliage flesh
everlasting legacy
especially..foliage flesh. i thought that was tight. excellent write
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Ooohhh, this is one of the most lovely descriptions of poetry that I have ever felt. You infused it with your feelings and the emotions that emanated from it are everlasting. Looking at the contest title I would say you will make the host stop, look and listen intently when they read what you have written. My breath caught while reading this, it is filled with vivid imagery and I love it to pieces. Best wishes for the contest and thank you. Keep writing poet, your words are amazing. seamaiden ♥
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This is one of the nicest comments a poet can receive. Thank you so much.
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^_^ ^_^
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HeHe, thanks for comming back with the bunnys!
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Just wonderful and the flow is like a song...You have shared poetry at it's finest...Good luck dear in the contest
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ell ya thats right on truly great i luve it and its so kewl you know cool with a K ^_^ sorry i havent read in awile but it looks as if i should read more often
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So very, very true! I couldn't have said it better myself. This is excellent!
~Hope all is well
~Hetha
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you siad it best. good luck in the contest
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You are beautiful. Finished or not, you always shine.
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How true this poem is! Beautiful use of language is one of the highest orders of the day!
You write lovely poetry, dear poet, and this poem is an example of "splendid."!
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redolent, mmm, who says, that I exceed these expectations in as far as word-wizardy goes, you have a great passion for teaching than learning, lovely work,
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beautiful lines sis just greatttt
your free verses are just great as your form ones
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Beautiful verses.
Let no one say you can not write free verse.
These lines are like a sliver of something precious.
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Thanks Mark, most people think I can't. I write all my poems in free verse then figure out what form will do them justice. I felt like this one was half finished.
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Wow. Thanks for that insight into your creative process.
Half finished.. or containing half of a mystery, Which is alluring?
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this is rather excellent... I think you've
captured it - the way a lot of people feel about it...
love: "penned on foliage flesh"
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yes this is poetry,nice refreshing piece to read,thank you for sharing and good luck..mm
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