Hoarded cumulation
tempest's spiral swirl
Whirlpools desirous
pain expunged
[purposeful extractions]
Beauty discovered
hidden portions of storm
Guide grief towards light
until reality is undone
[archetypes recounted]
Gloated glee
not malevolent vanity
Compressed form I can see
in sightly subdued thoughts
[sympathy sanctuary]
Calling foolishness
from unknown horizons
Sifted glories
from gutted morning
Shining regardless
[closer aberrations]
A contest entry
- Wherever you are stop and write! by alexandrathegreat.
1800 points, ended October 24, 2007, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your sentences are so short and to the point that is what I love about your poetry. Though sometimes I find them a little vague. Maybe it's just me. Early morning reading. The wording was beautiful keep up the delicious work!
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It is rare to find a poet who has the ability to master all form; even free verse. Powerful and thought provoking. Very well articulated piece!
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beautifully written mark with a strong flow and powerful words
it was awsome well done and best of luck
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ooooh nice. best of luck in this contest
i like the flow and how you interjected with the lines in paranthesis. awesome free verse range you are very good at this
Tasha
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I read this then read it again, this is really very good! Sporadic instant and spontaneous thoughts penned in rapid staccato verse. I had the feeling I was reading something by Sylvia Plath. This type of free verse is something I don’t do well and I admire you for doing it well.
Love,
Amera♥
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