What is eternity,
but a simple calculation of time itself...
You said you'd love me till the end,
and yet agian you put a limit to what has been thrown in front of you.
You dont understand eternity.
Yet, how can you when everything must comes to an end with you...
A contest entry
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600 points, ended November 20, 2007, 22 entries
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An interesting perspective...
An interesting perspective; you may want to reformat this, so that it more resembles a poem; just a thought. --Joe
Maybe you would enjoy a poem with the same title -
"Eternity"
The link is: http://allpoetry.com/poem/2308941 -
Interesting little write you have here. Just remember, the world doesn't end when a love dies
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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"but a simple calculation of time itself"...that is my fav line but i like it all good job boo keep up the good work!
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ok
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My name isn't AJ...
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very deep i like it
go on with the good work
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interesting
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