blues
with the eyes
of him
lift her up
into silence;
and
coffee grows
indigo,
on the third blue moon.
Author notes
blue moon - the third full moon in a season with four full moons.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie ~*~ 10. 20 by Asfand.
450 points, ended October 12, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Cool. Loved the use of moons in this piece, and how you related them to eyes. Great job indeed, KK, especially since you got silver.
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Beautiful ~
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I like the imagery of coffee to indigo...beautiful poem
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This reminds me of that old old song "blue moon" (way before your time, my friend). I so love the blueness here...of moon and eyes - and of course the flight! Lovely poetry!
~ Nicolette
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