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Son Of A...Mother

WHERE IS HE???
WHERES MY SON???
SHAWN...SHAWN

The fear of a mother
Who lost her four year old son
They were in the plaza
A family outing
A mother with her 3 kids
But things went wrong

.All it takes is a split second
And like that they're gone

A scream of terror rung throughout the shops
Everyone looked for that boy
We watched as a mother ran up and down the mall screaming
Screaming for her son
Her fear was so...real
I could feel it
Everyone who could hear that woman scream
Could feel her fear

.And there he was
Sitting there with his own silent fear.

He was found
He was sitting at information crying
For he had lost his mother
Everyone watched as she ran to him
Dropped everything in her hands and hugged him
Hugged him she was never letting go
And everyones fear...
Turned into love

A mother screamed
A child cried
A love like no other

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Comments

  • Vania
    October 12, 2007

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    beautiful poem, the power you write with is amazing, and the reader can just feel the fear of teh mother.
    good work kiddo!


  • Walking Tall
    October 8, 2007
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    very, very powerful.
    briliant write
    seej