Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Purgatory


Confused and losing all hope
this realm has several floors I fall
repeated anguish as tormented you float
heaven won't take you unclean
fire cleanse what is left of me
hell won't open its arms, for sweet I have been
I am the fire in which my body burns
eternity of fire and razors pain
accepting fate I drown in what I yearn
Hell smiles at my suffering embrace
gave me my level to rule
deaths love for me is the same.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Amber Lee
    October 8, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Great write!Nice and dark.


  • Klayer
    October 8, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    oooo me likie! very dark wright i think. Nice tho!

    A+

    |DF|14|