My teddy is silly, I'd like you to know
He follows me around wherever I go
I put him to bed, tell him to stay
but he follows me around anyway
He's always making problems you see
and whatever he does, mom blames on me
When we eat out, he gets in my food
making a mess and being so rude
He talks in the movies and pulls my hair
and spills my popcorn everywhere
Smacking and snoring, making a racket
He even put chocolate all down my jacket
Mom always says the problem is me
but it's my bear, why can't she see?
It's ok, he's my very best friend
I just wish his silliness would end
Though he follows me everywhere
I just love that silly old bear
Author notes
A class assignment for a childrens writing class
Pictures is from : http://dirtybeloved.blogspot.com/2005_11_27_archive.html
A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME! (now 12,000) - Part 2 Children's by cricketjeff.
1000 points, ended December 12, 2007, 19 entries
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Thank-you for your entry, this was a great contest and your poem added to that. Please enter as many of the later rounds as you feel able, we'd love to have you.
Jeff and Sue
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lol this is gorguse daddy
your princess -
daddy i had mr nobody and he did that stuff to not me and you had your bear and everyone use to try and steal him but he was invisible and then one day mr nobody vanished down the plug hole in the bath and i didnt see him again. i love you daddy huggggggs you tigh and i love your poem to.
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that is very cute dad.. i liked that. The picture you have fits the poem perfectly. I still sleep with my teddy but hes not loud.
good job here i love this one
and i love you too
Angel -
This is delightful, Mark
And the picture is perfect with it, a very good interpretation of the picture
Your rhyming is right on
Dee
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wowwwwwwwww daddy:S you just spoke of my teddy bear too
i still keep it and put him on my bed to gaurd
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hee heee
My Teddy gets scared at night and sleeps under my arm for protection. I tolerate him
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hee hee I love this daddy ...I bet Charly will giggle too when mom reads it to her I love you daddy
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awwww thats so sweet!!!
looooove it
A++++++
~[dREAM]~
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Awww how sweet, cute and silly! I Love it. It's precious, especially this early in the morning.
Great job!
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