Laying here awake in my bed,
Tossing and turning, he should be here with me,
Wanting him beside me with his arm tight around me,
My fingers running down his lovely chest,
And playfully over his nipples, making him shudder.
Laying here awake in my bed,
I just can’t seem to drift away,
Pondering what position his is in right at this very moment,
Or whether he is lying awake like me,
Is his mind troubled or pleasantly thinking about me?
To playfully run my fingers through his hair,
As he stares into my eyes and I look into his,
Is he using one or two pillows,
Or under the quilt or on top.
Laying here awake in my bed,
Longing to feel his soft gentle touch,
His breath on my neck behind me,
Beautiful eyes that reflect the moonlight,
Shining throught the window at us,
To kiss his findertips so lovingly,
To have him wrapped around me,
And be there for when I have a bad dream.
Laying here awake in my bed,
Wondering what he is wearing at this moment in time,
Is he as restless as I am?
Or just lacking the will to sleep?
How I wish I could tenderly kiss him,
To feel the comfort of his touch,
To caress me and send shives down my spine,
Giving me pleasant thoughts as I gracefully close my eyes.
Laying here awake in my bed,
Feeling sad, and now knowing why I so sleepless,
Not knowing what he is doing,
Not feeling such passionate things,
Here he should be, forever with me,
But yet he is not,
One thing I do know,
He's in another's bed....
Author notes
Not my best write, I'm affraid I need time to think about what I want to say and how I say, sorry if you don't approve of this write! I tried my best! This was written about my current obsession...you can use your imagination on the last line xx
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A contest entry
- For My Favorites!!! by SummerlandRayne.
466 points, ended October 16, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Thinking Of You. by Poetryintheblood.
375 points, ended October 28, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josephine
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don't apologize...
...because I think it was pretty good.The realness of your emotions come across, and that's y I think it is a good piece!
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thank you, but tbh, it's not something that I would write out of the blue, it's a write that I would have liked to have taken time over, but I really wanted to enter Az's contest which was new poems only, so I struggled to write it, and especially as the rules stated that it had to be 30 lines or more!
thanks again xx
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This write was wonderful...expressed very real and true feelings. I have spent many nights wondering and wishing for the very same thing. And the last line...yeah...I can relate to that too! Thank you so much for the entry and for sharing the depth of your heart! Best of luck in the contest...and in this situation.
Love You~
Az
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thanks Az, I didnt think it was that great tbh, so your comment really brightened my day,
love u too!
Heather-Grace xx
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