She called him Tissues,
He called her Tears,
And she thought it would last,
For the rest of their years.
But then he left,
And her heart broke,
Leaving her as someone,
That she didn't know.
She lost him,
And herself that day,
And to keep her life,
Was there any way?
She cried for days,
And almost gave up,
Because you see,
She was down on her luck...
She wanted it back,
The way it used to be,
But to find herself first,
That was the key.
So instead of giving up,
On the rest of her years,
She now spends her days,
Searching for Tears...
Author notes
Option 2!
Umm yeah, I thought I might kinda try to explain my name, I know it isn't very good but I tried...
Username; Searching4tears
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Pure emotion never apologize for that !!! good luck
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This is very good , thank you for entering , Storm
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Sad what happened to you, but I understand you explaination from your poem about why you picked your username. I think it was down well and creativily. Thanks for entering my contest. Good write and good luck.
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this was phenomenal. it was innocent, it a sad way, and had a wonderful flow to it. i enjoyed it tremendously. thank you for entering!!
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I like it...
Deep write that caught my attention from the beginning.
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It is very good I like that I never would have thought to write a poem about my name huh this was very well written for some one who is searching for tears thanks so much for entering i like this a lot
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i love it when people write a sort of "background story" on their names...
so i'm predisposed to love this.
especially since it pieces together nicely =)
great one
seej
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No its great, and makes perfect sense!
It's sad yet at the sametime i see a strenghth in you !
You didnt give up !
I am sorry about what happened but you may have been better off , but i dont know the story . I do hope and pray you find the tears you are looking for.
But this time i hope its not your own tears but a man who can cry with you not just hand you a tissue!
*hugs*
~Lisa~
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