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Sake Zen

Slowly warmed to
one hundred five degrees
precisely,

the aroma
makes my nostrils
tingle,

a quick dip of

my little finger and

a taste

tells me
it is ready.

Served in a small cup,
Royal Tokyo
fine ceramic with
eggshell finish

accented with
intricately painted
bamboo stalks
in aquamarine blue.

First sip is silky smooth,
so sublime

this nectar

once enjoyed by
oriental kings,

a warm rolling wave
slowly travels
to my belly, then
to my brain and


I drift

through a meticulously

groomed
rock garden with
sweet cherry blossoms
blown about by
gentle breezes.

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  • alexandrathegreat
    October 18, 2007
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    Oh is it sake? Hehe silly me

  • alexandrathegreat
    October 18, 2007

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    Wow tell me specifically which dish it is you described, because I want to taste it. Sounds excellent. Wonderful. I loved the imagery you incorporated simply smothered me in the scents and taste. Now I want some.


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    aaahhhhh....i love this poem.
    it is as delicate as the small
    tea cup and as charming as
    only you can be Love, Lane

  • ashjoe76
    October 8, 2007
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    very good

    Deft depitcion of a unique experience. Very good choice of wors.