Celestial angels wistfully dream
hoping to touch lovers unseen.
Wanting to play heavenly tunes,
under the light of full moon.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie ~*~ 10. 20 by Asfand.
450 points, ended October 12, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This has an enchanting feel
to it..
Love it!
~Pastel
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amazing.....
You have a knack for being able to write in several genres incredibly well. Your dark pieces are brilliant, yet when you're not writing dark, it's still brilliant poetry.
Knight70
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Wow. I love poems that involve love...just as this one did. I can see the other angel coming up behind her...the one that she loves...and, of course, she loves him. Good job with this piece.
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you captured the feel of heavenly romance in this piece... lovely.
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This is divinely beautiful. Reading the piece is like appreciating a classical painting.
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Nicely done here ~
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Oh this is beautiful. And I love the rhyme, it helps the flow greatly. The first couplet is my favorite, such imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest
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