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Being Alive

Electric impulses in my brain,
Colors flashing again and again.

My mind is whirling, swirling,
So this is what's called living.

The hues get brighter still,
Not via drugs for this is real.

Blue, red, pink, and white,
Make living such a delight.

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  • Bob Fox
    November 19, 2007

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    ???

    What can I say after I read your profile...But I do wish you will & am glad you still have a sense of humor. You have guts


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    I love the rhyme
    you did a great job with it
    for your words do not sound force

    Thank you for entering my contest

    Riftkin