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Only Three Shots

I really only take three shots

I swear

Only three.

 

The first

The last,

And how many

Were in between?

 

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    March 2

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    Love this. I got a laugh out of it first thing this morning. Thanks for sharing.


  • Angelflower
    April 7, 2008
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    Haha.. good one.. I really liked it.. cute..
    Good write..
    Peace to you,
    Jetleena


  • Demokrit
    October 13, 2007
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    It depends-but one should be enough-better none,
    great poem here.
    Made me laugh


  • TXCowgirl
    October 11, 2007
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    I love your creativity in this. I like the way you keep track of how many shots you do in one night. Maybe I should start doing it the same way as you This also made me feel as if you were trying to convince a cop that you weren't drunk! Thanks for the smiles and giggles.
    ~TXCowgirl


  • TheLostGirl
    October 11, 2007
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    I like this very funny and a haiku I swear that a poem type i ihave yet to try to master but you seem to master it pretty well and with humor very good job


  • BabyGurlz
    October 8, 2007

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    thats funny i like this poem good job i kno u look at mine i aint got much on there but im not done yet lol g/j hu


  • Tarja
    October 8, 2007

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    Not so much... though there were no rules, I didn't know people would take that as, post effortless poetry. Bah!

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