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Strangely Occurring

When you look out the window,
what do you really see?
Do you look at the bright sides
or do you look at the hatred
and the dark sides?
I guess that just depends on the situations…

How do you brush your teeth,
In a small circle or in straight lines?
do you brush them roughly,
if you do, then don’t decline,
cause that’s your business, not mine.

Don’t change yourself for me,
I won’t change myself for you.
We need to be ourselves.
Don’t you believe this, too?
If not, then, why don’t you?

I enjoy the way you talk,
I enjoy the way you walk,
But no, I do not stalk,
I just love you, that’s all.

I cannot touch you,
But I can see you.
It’s the best I can do
Until I leave this town
And meet you someday.
But I will when I am
In a different situation.

Don’t you think that would be fine?
that one day, you could be mine?
I’ve drawn a specific line…
and it points directly at you.

Author notes

Yet another one on someone I have a crush on. I hope you enjoy this, and I think that it's better than the first one I posted today. I hope you do, too.

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  • Angel Eyed Baby
    October 8, 2007
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    You and those crushes..lol... we all have them,
    Good write.


    • So Strange
      November 16, 2007
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      I'll also tell you, Autumn, who all of my poems are about, if you want to know?

  • xTomorrowx
    October 8, 2007

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    "But no, I do not stalk,
    I just love you, that’s all. "
    hehe i like that bit =)
    its an awesome poem, well done =)


  • Lady Australis silver member
    October 8, 2007
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    i like this one too bro
    you n your crushs
    i love you bro

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