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Ruminations on a dark night

Waking yet again
from dreams of love
long dead.
Your name on my lips
your touch on my skin.
So many years of forgetting
erased in one night.

How can I go on
knowing you're lost
to me, to yourself
to what we might have been?

I slip back into sleep
and pray I will find you.
Together in dreams
we live, we love, we ARE.


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My first love, resurrected again.

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  • xXxBeautiful SinxXx
    January 10, 2008

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    My god

    This is amazing.
    The way you word it.
    I have tried and tried but havent been able to convey this emotion.
    The way you wrote this just strikes the core.
    Rips right into my heart. I can relate to this.
    This is a good piece i'll say!


  • Susan John Francis
    October 8, 2007
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    Beautifully done...