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Bow




And I’ll bring a smile to your face, baby,
anyway that I know how.
`Cause that frown has pulled
your cupid's bow lips
backwards,
so that I think Eros
would shoot himself-
startled by the absence of your
          overwhelming love.





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"You don't have to force your smiles for anyone, It's okay to smile...for yourself"
~Alones by Awua Timez

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  • TwilightDazzles
    October 7, 2007

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    Ohh nice incorporation of Cupid and Eros. Beautiful take on the prompt. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in the contest!