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Release

I claim silence
A clam, I’m shut away
Uttering not even a whisper
Of the troubles I face
Yet you still hold me
Tight in your arms
Promising me your shoulder
And your undying love
Whenever I need a release

Author notes

Prompt: "Even if you won't talk about yesterday, I'll still be there to meet you tomorrow."
~Alones by Aqua Timez

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  • TwilightDazzles
    October 7, 2007
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    Please put whichever lyric you chose in your authors notes. It's obvious which one you chose, but to stay true to the rules, I must ask you to please do that. Aside from that, this is a beautiful take on the prompt. I love the word 'release' used here. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in the contest