You hold me so close,
in a way so I steam.
You make the darkness disappear,
you make me serene.
I kiss your neck,
in a way so you groan.
You do the same thing back,
so I let out a moan.
The scratch marks on your back,
are anewed from tonight.
The pain makes you stir,
and I scream from delight.
In the way we move,
every cell tingles.
The way your eyes beam,
sends me a signal.
The steam rises more,
the beads of sweat drop.
The climax is gone,
so we just need to stop.
We stare at the ceiling,
hearing eachothers panting.
We wait for the next day,
the day for romancing....
A contest entry
- ( ! A N Y T H I N G ! )*~*~PRE-WRITES are OK ... 203;203;203;203;203;203;​​R by xxlisajazminexx.
425 points, ended October 9, 2007, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TONS OF OPTIONS/prewrites/whatever..... by landmark.
450 points, ended November 4, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow this was soooooooooooooooo sexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxy
loved it and loved the rhyme also!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ENTERING THIS WONDERFUL PIECE INTO MY CONTEST!!!!!!!-----
WISHING YOU MUCH LOVE----
AND GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XxLisaJazminexX
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i agree with Lacie 100%! no poems then BAM! SEX! HOt digidy damn! woman that was HOTT!
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Hot damn, no poetry and then THIS? I love it!!! Super sexy...although I tried so hard to picture me and vint rather than you and bradley poo. Lol. I LOVE YOU!
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