You shout emotion
through hushed tones.
Desire in my eyes
scream “I’m yours”
I want to climb inside,
explore the spaces
in your mind
Trace my fingers
across your intellect
….blow away insecurities
like a child making
wishes on dandelions.
Author notes
Prompt: "Even if you won't talk about yesterday, I'll still be there to meet you tomorrow."
~Alones by Aqua Timez
Wow, it was really hard cutting this down to 40 words!
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Comments
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Liked this a lot. Liked it from about middle to end more than the beginning.
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Haha, the whole 40 words thing is a challenge!
This was marvelous, a truly beautiful take on the prompt! The whole last stanza blew me away! Plus I am a huge fan of dandelions! Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest!
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