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Love Shines....

You're my enlightening spirit
sharing glee in any weather;
my electrifying lifeforce of joy,

Our hearts dancing in the rain
from ethereal angelic tears;
rainbows of our souls

Love shines...

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The picture above:
I'm only happy when it rains. by ~Be-at (deviantart.com)

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"Between the Sheets"

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  • StarEyes
    January 3

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    Oh I know what went through my mind as I was reading this, and you know, you captured it quite well! What a great read!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 9, 2007

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    love this very sweet, and it shines to the heart, thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, and I wish all the best to you in the contest. This is beautiful...~blessings~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    NIce,

    Love this sweet soul, thanks for sharing your wonderful words so beautifully inscribed within your heart.. Keep up the great works, and shine on. All the best!

    -Timothy


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 7, 2007
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    It shines


  • PerfectImperfection
    October 7, 2007
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    Very nicely done. Great take! Thanks so much for your entry!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    October 7, 2007

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    A wonderful written piece. Making rain delightful. Great job and good luck in the contest.
    Soulful Woman

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