In ineffectual efforts to obviate debasement
she immerses in waters of despondency
optimistic that repression will be her cure
quietude someday she will obtain
in lunacy contrived by philistine intruder.
Author notes
Quickie Contest (30 words)
Prompt: Picture
A contest entry
- Quickie: Paying it Forward by PerfectImperfection.
550 points, ended October 7, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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philistine lovely biblical word,,waters of depondency..how beautiful your words knit xxpp
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congrats...
...to you on your honorable win award; you deserve it!
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You are so good at these minimalistic writes and you form the most beautifully creative pieces. Good luck in the contest Hun. You are ALWAYS a winner as far as I'm concerned.
♥ Touchof1der
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Very deep and intense piece. Beautifully written.
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Wow. that's deepish
Best of luck luck
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Nicely done! Thank you so much for your entry!
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