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Jake

At this moment
for the only thing I care
Is run my yearning fingers through your hair
Slowly,
Softly,
Gently,
To press my lusting lips,
against your subtle pale ones,
Your name
through my head it runs


I see the river again,
dark,
inky black,
streaked with ghostly white
moonlight,
I see you,
you and your beautiful blue
eyes

Jake,
for god's sake
can't you be straight!


I want you so badly,
my heart, it beats madly,
at the slightest thought of you

I have no choice,
when I hear your voice
but to melt,
to become one with the melody you sing
and with you
Sexy, Sweet, Sensitive, you

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  • passionate-poet
    November 3, 2007

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    interetsing poem not sure if i have the right interpretation but i like it none the less:_) thanks for sharing!


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    October 7, 2007

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    This is sensual and incredibly warm and dreamy...you do have talent, you just have to dive in deep and bring it to surface. Love the imagery and the flow in this poem, my sweet daughter...Keep up the good work and know that I am proud of you, gurlie~

    ~Your AP Daddy,
    ~jeremiC.