upon sheets
curls yearning,
fantasy's words
falling from
longing fingers;
between sheets
lies emptiness,
in spaces void of
passion's heat;
and my fingers
ache to touch more
than just
imagination...
Author notes
Prompt: between the sheets
A contest entry
- Quickie: Paying it Forward by PerfectImperfection.
550 points, ended October 7, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the use of the double meaning of the word sheets. Awesome!!! The first introduces your poetry--and i love "curls yearning" to describe the words on the page, representative of thier emotional inspiration.
The second explores the inspiration, which is so perfectly penned. Then you pull both stanzas together in beautiful unity in the last one. I love it!
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i like this, especially the closing 2 lines
well done. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Nice thoughts!
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Ah, very nice take here! Thank you so much for your entry!
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Beautiful and sensual. Great job with the prompt.
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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