Between the sheets I seek to find
A man whose body, heart, and mind
Can make me quiver, moan, and grind
Our souls becoming intertwined
Ecstacys limit redefined
Author notes
The Prompt I used was:
"Between the Sheets"
A contest entry
- Quickie: Paying it Forward by PerfectImperfection.
550 points, ended October 7, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 10 of 10
-
Is that not the ultimate dream, I think so,
lol
-
awesome lil quickie!!!
great flow says just what it needs to.
you are very talented, i must keep reading
Tasha
-
this was beautifully written and a wonderful take on the prompt
wonderfully crafted with metaphors
well done and best of luck
-
Boom. Damn that was awesome, George. I absolutely loved it. Good luck in the contest.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
-
now this is good nice flow and rhyme and very nicely put best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
-
Now this is some wonderful rhyming here and flows so well with those sheets.
-
ha ha
Nice wordage my friend. I hope you find what you are looking for
-
Ooh - very nice take on the prompt! Thank you so much for your entry!
-
Very well done... Great job with the prompt.
Good luck
Soulful Woman
-
Good luck dude!
Adding your comment:
1 - 10 of 10
