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Finding Reassurance

Message floats
through clouded folly

wafting down
toward heart
that grasps
the needed note,

when all but hope

was lost.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Lady Eventide
    October 13, 2007

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    Wow. I really like this. It reminds me of someone thinking that they'd lost a loved one, but a message comes that says the loved one is ok. Good job with this piece.


  • Asfand
    October 9, 2007
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    Nicely penned ~


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 8, 2007
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    perfect

    Beautifully put, good luck in the contest.