Soliloquies soft
Subtle paradoxes
Speaking precipitation
Showers of poetic thought
Sensed in clear raindrops
Spiritually beautiful in nature
Soothing scenic patterns
Slighted never by blue delays
Sincerity of moisture remains
A contest entry
- Quickie: Paying it Forward by PerfectImperfection.
550 points, ended October 7, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Each S looks like a drop on the page. I love the image of your poem. Great write and congrats on the HM.
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lovely and tongue twisting, glad i dont have to read this out loud anywhere hehe. congrats on the HM.
Tasha
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this was a beautiful tongue twisting write for the early morning lol
wonderfuly crafted with words i still cease to understand
well done bro and congrats on honary
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Wow. That was absolutely beautiful. I loved the fact that you used s's as the first word of each line, and I loved the imagery. Congratulations on your new shiny trophy. Very imaginative.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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very nice sweetie, the repetition of the S was a nice touch and all your thoughts here are so soothing, wonderfully done
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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I love the
I want to say alliteration.... but have a feeling thats not the right word.....IS IT?? Anywho...the repetitive S sound was a nice effect....and it all sorta slides so super smoothly from the lips!! Good luck in the contest!
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SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSoooo silky and soothing to read.
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complete sensory experience of the mind body and soul well done bro xxxxx well done
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Show off... lol Using S's on all the first letters...Really well done...Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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A thought twister. Nicely done! Thanks so much for your entry!
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