droplets of rain
in perfect harmony
on my window sill
one comes slowly at first
sliding down
then joins another
what a lovely sight
rain is a mystery
which gives us joy
A contest entry
- Quickie: Paying it Forward by PerfectImperfection.
550 points, ended October 7, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your most popular by Beating.
425 points, ended October 26, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very nice poem good luck in the contest
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yeah you're right. Rain is a mystery. I've always been fascinated with rain and the way people use it in their poetry. We all have a different poetic view on it, just like yourself. It's a "touch of nature"
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Always intrigues me to see people and their adoration of the rain.
Sometimes it's almost like watching a child find their mother after a long days absence
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WOOOW! this was a great piece... and i totally agree with you man! rain Is a mystery and it does bring us loads of joy! Just watching the droplets fall is so beautiful and heart-warming!
And running in the rain or walking in it is fun too! I'ts just so much fun! It makes us forget all our problems and be happy! Lobe rain... takkire!
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I love the rain! This is a very lovely quickie! Best of luck to you in your contest!
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rain is truly a mystery of the spirit - quite mesmerizing well done xx
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Lovely
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Nice take on the prompt! Thanks so much for your entry!
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Nice take on the prompt, it goes well with the picture... Best of luck in the contest!
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A beautiful description of rain. Goes very well with the prompt and picture. Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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