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Remembered

Missing image
fingertips search
heavenly skies
reaching to touch
passersby's

seeking face
and lost form
craving familiar warmth
of a child born



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  • Lady Eventide
    October 13, 2007

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    Ooh. Nice. You took the picture and made a story out of it in 20 words, which you made look so easy, too. Good job.


  • Asfand
    October 9, 2007
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    Very beautiful ~


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 8, 2007
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    Excellent!

    I love this, the rhythmic flow is superb, best of luck to you!


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    October 7, 2007

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    What an interesting thought--seeking lost form. Very nice. Such pensive longing--to seek to know self and form like a child being born. I never would have perceived the angel in this way. This was truly lovely.