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Forever...

with every breath

and every sigh

I am yours

my heart knows

your deepest secrets

my tongue,

your taste

when we hold hands

I can’t tell my fingers

from yours

and when we kiss

our tongues entwine

like the convolution of vines

one glimpse of you

and my heart whispers

. . . "FOREVER"



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  • fading memories
    October 12, 2007

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    beautiful

    thank you for sharing this with me, amy was invisiond in my thoughts from the beginning to the end of this poem


  • TXCowgirl
    October 8, 2007

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    With every breath and every sigh, this too makes me sigh as I breathe in the beauty of your words. I see such an outpouring of love spoken here and you have done it with all the class it deserves. This looks like a winner to me! Good luck in the contest.


  • Midnight Lace
    October 8, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Awwww...I found this to be such a sweet and endearing love poem. I have never read a more beautiful and masterfully penned love poem as this one. You have really outdone yourself. Best wishes in the contest, most definately a winner!
    Smoochie