What am I?
I am the sun that rises in the east,
and sets in the west.
I am the mountain that holds your dearest wish at it's peak,
and the valley you must cross before climbing.
I am the star that shines bright during the night,
glowing like a beacon as I guide you Northward.
I am the nightmare that haunts you when sleep comes,
and teaches you of life when it is denied.
I am the wind that speaks to you in whispers,
and guides you with a gentle but firm hand...
I am what lives inside your heart and soul,
telling you what is right and what is wrong...
What am I that controls you so,
that can move you as if you were a marionette?
You are nothing,
but everything to me.
I cannot breathe without your presence,
or feel without your touch.
I control you,
but you control me as well.
So, what am I?
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Contest - Making this Blank Canvas Come to Life! by Arkbear.
600 points, ended October 8, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Interesting entry ~
I was hoping for something to make this canvas come to life ~
I think if you would have taken a different approach
to this Theme, it may have worked for this contest ~
Thank you for entering ~
Be well Poet,
Bear ~
Score: 94.5

