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Petal Substitute

Amber roses,
token of past
undying love.
Left in solitude,
brushing rough,
wilted petals
as substitute for
soft, supple skin.

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Prompt: Caressing wilted petals

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  • Lady Eventide
    October 13, 2007

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    Wow. Beautiful piece you have here. Loved how you have so many images for me to devour...and you only used 20 words. Good job.


  • Asfand
    October 9, 2007
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    Beautiful ~


  • Mykeee
    October 8, 2007

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    lovely, soft supple skin. I love roses because I write about them a lot. I like Orchids too. Left alone as a dying petal. Nicely done ~ Mykey


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 8, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Such lovely imagery appeared as I read this, beautiful. Good luck in the contest!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 7, 2007

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    I like this it reminds me of a fading love thankyou for sharing this piece with me goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love

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