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Broken

Deranged from society
Feeling of disbelief
Trapped inside
Though broken out
Society keeps me in
The pain keeps me out

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prompt: Inside a broken shell

A contest entry

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  • Lady Eventide
    October 13, 2007

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    I feel this way sometimes, too...almost as if I don't belong. Great work you have here. Really nice entry for this contest. Good job.


  • Asfand
    October 9, 2007
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    Very deep ~


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 8, 2007
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    Emotional

    Powerful, in so few words. Great piece. Good luck!