She won't let go
I can't get her to leave
always at my heart's door
scratching her way under my skin
till my heart screams for her presence
and when she leaves i miss her being there
I hope she never goes
That She will always be there with me
If she leaves i will miss her
My ears can't see
My eyes can't hear
her leaving
her going
her final goodbye
A contest entry
- NO RULES-EXEPT NO EROTICA (I CANT READ THEM) by Nicotine Eyes.
475 points, ended October 20, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time For You To Take A Chance ~ Round One by Tears and Raine.
320 points, ended January 26, 2008, 176 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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deep
i feel the same way about a certain person <3 mariah
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wow. the use of emotion in this one is clear. I'm sure you could win any contest.
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Excellent Write
you have an intresting style of poetry, that wrapped me up inside of this heart of yours. The read rolled off the tongue smooth like warm honey....loved it...Novy
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cool! I liked it, very well writen!
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I like this poem. Losing people you love sucks.
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wow, this is good. i agree. * Thanks for entering and Good luck!
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this is very good indeed! I likey it!
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wow very touching. I've felt that way. damn I still feel like that. good writing!
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I like this especially "My ears can't see
My eyes can't hear" I love it I understand this poem I have made a few people feel like this in my lifetime it sucks to know that but I really like this poem I could definetly relate
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awwwwwwwwwwwww thats sad now me sad lol but i like it
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