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Passing Away

Such a softened way
of explaining death
but there are those
who have died softly
slowly,quietly,willingly.

And oh, each stab was worth it
the bullets broke my sanity
suffocation without a struggle

Inhuman with a dependency unmatched
I've woken up in a palace prison
"Take this body, it is...not...mine."

The curtains are nice, the garden too
I wake up in peace beside my love
the sun defines his strong features
and it reminds me how alive he is...

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neither angel, nor devil


Just living in limbo...

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  • Broken Faith
    October 9, 2007
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    Forgot your smilies


  • Broken Faith
    October 9, 2007
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    Hmmm...

    Like they said, different but good nonetheless. Well written, made me think. Love ya Madi.


  • Cup-a-Joe silver member
    October 8, 2007

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    Madison,
    This is different. I have re-read it a few times now, and I think I am geting the intent. Keep on posting,a cause I like reading your words.
    Joe

  • emLeejo
    October 7, 2007

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    it was... good.. different and good.. kinda scared me just a teeny bit though lol but good write. lol luvs ya!