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Paradise

Like the sweetness of early morning dew

emotions flow like the waters beneath me

high tides form my silhouette

as I enjoy the comfort

of tranquil breezes

that so graciously embrace my face

as I reach

for the emerald skies

the sun rays kiss my skin with glaze

floating in blissful moments

that has captured me like a wave

surfing in calm winds & blue seas

I am captivating the ambiance

of sensuality

memoir's of emancipated rivers that flow

of the essence

 cashmere moments

like finely aged wine

as I simmer in my thoughts

and rest upon my rose petal bed

and ride into the sun set

Author notes

My prompt is Picture #6
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  • Shadow Lynx
    August 7, 2008

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    Im not sure if its the picture in perfect harmony with the poem or vice versa. Either way peace , harmony and sun kissed beaches is where it took me. And what a slow sensual journey it was too i can tell you. Each line blended effortlessly into the next and i kinda forgot where i was for a min Congratz on gold it was well deserved !


    • Ephiphany
      August 7, 2008
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      Thank you so much for this comment.

      I'm moved by your words. Thanks again

      ephiphany


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    Ephiphany wow this is captivating dear lol Beautiful Poem well deserving of Gold Thanks for entering my contest I wish you the best of luck

    • Ephiphany
      December 28, 2007
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      lol

      Thank you...after I finally got it right
      I appreciate your patience, while this ole bird get her feathers straight
      E


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 21, 2007

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    Congrats on your gold

    Well written poem of Paradise. It suits the pix perfectly. Thank you for sharing this beauty.
    Buddy


  • penman gold member
    October 21, 2007
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    Excellent

    Such an incredible poem for the picture. Congratulations on the gold.


  • Marctheman
    October 21, 2007
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    great write, congratulation on winning the gold, well deserved.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 14, 2007

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    OH this was stunning.
    Sensational take on that pic. bueatiful flowing words
    wonderfully weaved together. Thank you for entering the contest



    delila


    • Ephiphany
      October 15, 2007
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      Thanks Delight

      I appreiate your comments always.

      ephiphany


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    just stunning honey you really ran in to the world of imagination and that is what you have to do now this is pure entertainment here you did a great job good luck in the contest


    • Ephiphany
      October 8, 2007
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      Thanks Jewels

      I was deep in thought on this....I liked it too. Sometimes, honestly I amaze myself.



      e


  • A63-Angel
    October 8, 2007

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    very good as well!! i can almost see the rose petal bed and feel the breeze....nice!! and ty for the nice comment on my contest entry.


    • Ephiphany
      October 8, 2007
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      Thank you too

      for stopping by. I really appreciate your comment.

      ephiphany


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 8, 2007

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    absolutely lovely sis, wow!
    best of luck in this contest this write of yours is brilliant & beautiful

    Tasha


    • Ephiphany
      October 8, 2007
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      Thanks llil sis

      always appreciate your support.

      sissy poo


  • Swan song gold member
    October 7, 2007

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    This is very good I am a bit speechless right now but I enjoyed this poem and it hit my heart right in the
    tender spot


    • Ephiphany
      October 8, 2007
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      Thanks jeff

      I like the new name change...marvelous
      I always appreciate your comments, very encouraging.

      e


  • HaleyMary
    October 7, 2007
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    Beautiful write, Sis. This had a nice peaceful feeling to it.
    I liked the part of the tranquil breeze the best. Such a beautiful way of describing the wind as it moves the water and the movement of a gentle wind on a person's face. Best wishes to you in the contest.


  • Mykeee
    October 7, 2007

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    oooooo cashmere moments. what a line. this had such a great fantasy feel to it. great entry 2 the contest ~ My Keeeeeee

    • Ephiphany
      October 7, 2007
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      Thanks Captial Keeeeeee

      sorry, I get the giggles when I do that, but NT ways, thanks for your comment on my contest entry.
      I appreciate you always,

      Coco


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 7, 2007

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    STUNNING WRITING

    STUNNING WRITING HERE PIFF. THE IMAGERY JUST BLEW ME AWAY. I WAS TAKEN WITHIN MY MIND TO THOSE PLACES YOU SPOKE OF IN YOUR PIECE. EMERALD SKIES , SURFING IN CALM WINDS AND BLUE SEAS. WOW, BRILLIANT IMAGERY AND FLOW.

    ALL THE BEST
    WAYNE
    X


    • Ephiphany
      October 7, 2007
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      Thanks Wayne

      I greatly appreciate your comment on Paradise.

      e


  • Swtpoetryman
    October 7, 2007

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    FITS THIS BEAUTFUL PICTURE TO A T, BABY!

    GOOD LUCK in the contest with it - and Thank You SO MUCH for sharing it with me for this is one of your best pieces - to say the least - and thta is saying a lot! I truly enjoyed on Sunday evening. I'm always a little blue on Sunday night and I don't sleep very soundly, either - as I often have nightmares about the work week ahead. Reading this before going to bed may just be what the doctor ordered for a beautiful night of sweet and sensual dreams. We shall see.
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.


    • Ephiphany
      October 7, 2007
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      Glad I can help my friend....

      sleep well and thanks so much for stoppin in to see me today.

      ephiphany


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 7, 2007

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    This is so beautiful my friend!
    I think you did a great job with
    this one. Way to go and good luck
    to you with it in this contest!




    Jeremy0826


    • Ephiphany
      October 7, 2007
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      Thanks J...baby

      you are so sweet, I appreciate your comments very much.

      ephiphany


  • onesugar gold member
    October 7, 2007

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    How do you do it Piff

    This is just beautiful lil sis

    Enjoyed every word that flowed from the page

    Just love reading your work

    Love ~sugar~ xx

    • Ephiphany
      October 7, 2007
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      I'm a Pisces sis

      nah, just kidding I just go deep in thoughts of things I love and/or would like to be in my life. This particular contest had several options and this is the picture I chose picture #6, instead of something ppl are used to and that is me writing erotic.

      Just a change, thats all...love you and thanks for the comment.

      ephiphany

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