Her room is so dark and the air so still,
as she lays there naked,
gagged,
tied,
stretched to her limit.
Her skin burns as the rope bites into her wrist and her ankles.
She screams and screams and begs and pleads,
but only a muffled whimper escapes her dry swollen lips.
She wonders how long she has been here,
in her punishment .
Her muscles,
longoing to contract,
her mind spinning through thoughts and memories,
as though they are on fast forward.
Occasionally interrupted by a violent spasm,
as with each passing second
the stretch seems to become more severe.
Finally,
after what seems to be hours,
she finds solace in her the pain,
she finds comfort in the blackness,
she finds warmth in her skin....
she floats,
away from the shackles,
away from the room.
Away from reality.
Entering into a place of freedom,
where her mind soars with the eagles,
where her thoughts seem sharp and concise.
The pain has become pure pleasure....
is this bliss?
Far away footsteps,
on silky black satin she squirms,
she slinks,
to entice Him to her.
His manhood she craves,
her wetness shinny on her thighs.
Her need for His touch so obvious and wanton,
her desires pour from her,
as she coos to Him...
all of her is for Him...
no part off limits,
no inhibitions.....
He releases her shackles,
she falls to her knees and crawls to Him,
begging His forgiveness,
begging His use,
begging to be allowed to service Him.
She is His slave and knows well her place....
at His feet.
A contest entry
- anything goes by Cat.
700 points, ended October 7, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lustful Erotica Contest by ckwriter69.
910 points, ended October 25, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ohh La la by Twisteddolly.
900 points, ended October 23, 2007, 22 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love this! This is me summed up in words! LoL I am a pet who knows her place at His feet! Fantastic write!!!
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Good luck in all the contests you've entered. You seem to be very desperate for a trophy... though no harm done... I've seen worse!
This was a very sexy piece. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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i guess i just enjoy competing....and getting different people's perspectives...some people like what i write, some don't, but either way, i hope to be able to learn something from everyone. Thank you for taking the time to comment.
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I agree very sensual and submissive, the need and desire was clearly seen and felt. I wonder though, if he does decide to use her or is her punishment over? thank you soo much for entering.
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Thank You for your comment...and i do believe the punishment part was over...the rest of the night was pure emotional as well as sexual bliss!!!
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nice bdsm write, very submissive and sensual. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Thank You for taking the timeto read and comment on my poem. i appreciate that very much.
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Kinky..
Very kinky. Kept my mind going. I continued on and serviced him. Very well I might add! Very nicely written and wonderfully thought out. I'm impressed, not to mention HOT! Thanks for entering. Good luck in the contest.
Sunshine
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I commend you on this superb write Katie ... your words came from the heart and the touched mine too
unfortunately, when people put up a contest and say 'anything goes' most people assume that it means they won't be judged, but, alas, many people frown on things they do not understand ~shrug~
excellent piece my friend - WELL DONE
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Oh well....As long as Master is happy, i am also.
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eww
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