As God lay his paintbrush
Upon our lovely land.
He added a splash of gold
To help fall stand.
In gentle kisses he added
Yellow and brown,
Those little whisper
that winter is coming around.
The squirrels are gathering
their winter nuts,
Packing them in
just enough.
As the animals fur
Thickens with haste,
last chance to prepare
For winter is on its way.
The air takes on a crisp new feel,
Mornings fog draping over the fields.
Turning the sun to a dull hew,
Bidding the summer days adeue.
The bright blue skies turn into a golden ray,
The night is colder winter is on it's way.
Birds softly sing their Autumne song,
Down the sidewalk the leaves roll along.
Fall is here winter is near,
It's time to get ready for cheer.
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An excellent little poem that painted a warming image of the closing of one season and the expected opening of a new one A joy to read
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Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it feel free to read more.
Amber
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this is good, you have good ideas and you have put them together nicely in stanzas holding different thoughts, very well done...PK
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Thank you so much for reading I'm glad you liked it. Feel free to read more.
Amber
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Amber,
WOW! A beautifully written poem. This reminds me of one I wrote called 'nature's Paintbrush'. Tennessee has to be a beautiful place in the fall. I have been there but it was in the months of July and August. I had a blast though! The Smokies is where I stayed. Beautiful place. Heaven on earth!
Now back to the poem at hand. As I said beautifully written, I love the flow! Well crafted by a poet who can and will go far. Just keep the ink flowing!
~Donna~
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wow thanks for the comment I'm glad you liked it.
Amber
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This is really a nice piece,I love it Autumn is my favorite time of the year as for a title how about Autumn's Splendor ? Thank you for sharing this with me best wishes and much love
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Thank you for reading this poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always like to try and write one the seaons that we are in. It's nice to read something different once in a while. Feel free to read more.
Amber
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How beautiful! Perfect imagery of this blessed season! I loved this!
Blessings~
Az
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Thank you so much for reading feel free to read more.
Amber
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Automes Bliss
Maybe this would be a good name Automes Bliss and yes indeed it should win a trophy this one and good luck I love the part at the bottom too you did very well
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