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hidden feelings

hidden feelings,
unsaid words
conversations never had
i hide when pain comes knocking
yet still it enters in.

secret thoughts
hidden words
never telling how i feel

i cant seem to hear
i cant seem to talk
icant seem to tell you how i feel

i hide it still
never can i speak of it
ill never have the courage to tell you
how i feel inside
the pain you cause the trouble you made...

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  • Onfire4Jesus
    November 5, 2007
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    Wow. From personal experience, keeping things buckled up inside is not healthy and only creates stress and pain for you. I do hope that you realize that you should let out whatever you have inside. As Roccio says, if you ever need anyone to talk to, you know where to find me I'm here for you my friend
    God Bless You!!
    Charles


  • warrior-eagle
    October 13, 2007
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    i hide when pain comes knocking
    yet still it enters in.
    ~~~
    Its absolutely NOT good to keep ypur feeling bottled up inside because evntually you break down and those break downs are not good,so if you ever need anybody to talk to you know where to find me.

    ....Simply Me♥