Prowling through the darkened streets
The Feline stalks as if on air
Each footstep as silent as the midnight hour
Its mew so chilling, it is instant dispair.
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I like This
I really liked the start of this poem. I found myself incorporating the midnight blackness to a stalker like cat which reminds me of my newest kitten I adopted and took in since she was abandoned and calling her Midnight and any ways well this is just an awesome start so far. any ways love how you wrote this poem so far and well I look forward to the completed piece. good work and keep it up
Signed, Paul
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For some reason..
I see a Tabby Cat
running from the
Mountain Lion
you're describing.
....ooooh. Maybe a Panther.
Send me the link on this with the additions!
~May the ink in your pen flow freely~
Chaos
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This is quite a well penned poem and I really like the starting basis to this poem. you habe in te making an ingenius and beautifully penned poem. looks good so far and lookin forward to receommenting when its finished
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Cant wait to see the finished product! I am enjoying it tremendously so far.....
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