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ten one thousand

Breathe IN
  {one one thousand}
Breathe Out
  {two one thousand}
Load It
    {three one thousand}
Cock It
    {four one thousand}
Breathe In
      {five one thousand}
Breathe Out
      {six one thousand}
Tear one
        {seven one thousand}
Scream Loud
        {eight one thousand}
Remember why
          {Nine one thousand}
Pull it
          {ten one thousand}

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  • backdrop.silhouette
    October 8, 2007

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    Jesus Christ...

    this fucking rocks.
    I had to read it like three times to get it...but eventually i got it...
    still really fecking awesome.
    Tres clappys for j0000!

  • coolleychic
    October 8, 2007
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    O.M.G.

    That's scary!!! I really liked. Not to wordy and straight to the point..Should I be worried?


  • The Guardian
    October 7, 2007
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    im gonna bite you


  • Dirty and Broken
    October 7, 2007
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    this is so...impersonal and personal at the same time..it makes me wanna cry....

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