You're the first thing I think about,
when my clock blares it's alarm.
I thing about your smile,
and the way you hold me tight.
You're what I think about all day long,
through the sushine and the rain.
I think about your shining eyes,
and how you like to stare into mine.
You're what I think about,
when Iook up at the stars.
I think about your strong hands,
and how they always find mine.
You're the last thing I think about,
before I drift to sleep at night.
I think about how you cuddle me,
when I have the chills.
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Lovely work here, I really enjoyed it.
Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest.
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Yikes! This is like number three that has fallen over the line limit by only one mere line. Sorry, but this entry will be removed from the contest. Thank you for entering though. Storm
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This one has quite the feeling of longing in it, those moments when you can't be with the one you carry so close to the heart. You've expressed that very clearly with this poem.
Thank for this entry as well!
Leander -
Aw... Very sweet, and very airy. It seemed like you let your heart speak through the pen.
Great job
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This is so sweet and tender. You really poured out your heat, opening yourself up and sharing the emotions that have bloomed. great job on this.
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WOW! You really sound like you are in love. Your feeling are well displayed and i love your title. Keep up the great work!
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Your feelings spilled out of your words in a beautiful and honest expression of love. Very well written with a lovely flow and rhythm.
Margaret
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