Family is people who support you
How guide you, and tell only the truth
They love you, with all their heart,
And they help you get very smart.
Family members guide you through
They keep all your secrets, too.
They make sure that you're okay
Every minute of every day.
Families beleive in you.
And yes, you know they do.
They blow you kisses, hugs and more,
Just wait and see what's in store!
Pets are also family members
They all like sharing love together.
Pets can be cute and cuddly,
Even if maybe they're ugly.
I guess what I'm trying to say is,
What's family without the fizz?
Be nice to the family that surrounds you
They must be your highest value!
Author notes
I love my family so much.
Option 3.
I'm 11.
A contest entry
- Contest For Ages 13 and Younger by Kari.
300 points, ended October 10, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For the kids 13 and younger: Anything to cheer me! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended January 20, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oooooh! This is a wonderful poem and such a glowing message! My favorite line is "What's family without the fizz?" Funny and cute. I see you've already gotten one gold on this, maybe you'll get two! Who knows? Best wishes in the contest pandy15. This should cheer anyone up, it certainly did me
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Very nice indeed. Sounds like you have a great relationship with your family. Thanks for sharing this and entering my contest. Good luck to you.
Brian -
This is very sweet
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Supurb
Such an excellent write you have here my dear . Yes what is the family without the fizz I love that
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