My body is a stockmarket
My heart is leading me by the chin
Fluctuating
Between love and my
Fifteen minutes of fame
The truth will come
This solidified love doesn't care who you are
I would like to tie my life up in a pretty little bow
I take my pills and plenty of daily affirmations
That does what it can for me
I am here falling in love
Messy
anyhow
A contest entry
- anything goes by Cat.
700 points, ended October 7, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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you had some good images here- i feel like they are a bit disjointed though (not really belonging to each other) - but i like that you stretched yourself and tried a creative approach to your poetry
m -
Oh dear...
you have some GREAT lines in this write!
my heart is leading me by the chin...SUPERB!
well done!
love is messy...no doubt!
Blessings! Tammy
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