amble and
listen to
memories
~find his infliction~
nostrils of
recollection
desperate
to find taste
stroke and
finger
the door
while
farmland air fills
with
wardrobe traces
fine china
nestled into
a place of blankets
compassing dreams
whispering promising
returns
.
Author notes
"Good authors too who once knew better words,
Now only use four letter words
Writing prose, Anything Goes."
(title and quote from the song - to give credit there)
"I been thinkin' 'bout
Thinkin' 'bout sex
Always hungry for somethin'
That I haven't had yet"
(this from Guns and Roses- Anything Goes title)
A contest entry
- anything goes by Cat.
700 points, ended October 7, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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yep
gold
indeed
I really like the range of styles and subjects you take on.
and
master so well
this one is just beautiful
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I loved it.
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this is really just a lovely piece- very nice
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Thanks for the gold mary... it was fun to be in some contests this weekend.
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i really like this, especially stanza 4... excellent music there..
al
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I like where you have taken this!
creative and clever, indeed! this piece is filled with wonderful ideas and sounds - very well worded!
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thanks ellipsist
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Very inspired
Not sure what it all means...it is beautiful and very well written
I love the imagery!
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thank you mermaidshepard
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