Have you ever stayed up all night writing poetry
It's quite the experience
Pondering the darkness
Yearning for love
Consumed by loneliness
Crying
Have you ever looked for every thought in your mind
Every feeling in your soul
Have you ever wanted one person to be there so bad
You'd thought you'd die if they weren't
Have you ever thought about dying
Have you every taken a walk at dawn
I've stayed up all night writing poetry
Please tell me what you think
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Excellant/intriguing/unique
Can't say that I have done all of that. Yet, I found this to be very well written with good imagery.
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sooo yes
its practically a ritual for me!
thanks for sharing
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Very cold, but with a casual twist that keeps my attention. Excellent poem.
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of your words I am not worthy
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"Have you ever looked for every thought in your mind
Every feeling in your soul"
My favorite I love your no-nonsense approach to writing...there's no artifice , nothing forced
obviously straight from the heart,
in my humble opinion --the way
poetry should be!
I love it!!
~Pastel
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i like the imagery put across in this poem and i have had some of those thoughts before. good write
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and I love your Kenshin pic
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